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Subject:   Re: A SAMPLE
Name:   Sybrena
Date Posted:   Jun 9, 06 - 7:42 PM
Email:   batsios@sbcglobal.net
Message:   Will,
I see! Is it okay to use both? Like this;

For years I traveled trying to find my way. Endless hours on the road, looking for a kind face, a friend. I recall the first time that I met robin. Sitting on the grass in a nameless park. A dog ran up to me barking.
I'm sorry. Did he scare you?

Just a little but, that's okay. He woke me up. I think I was daydreaming.

He really is a *****cat. He just pretends to be scary, but wouldn't hurt a fly.

I'm Amber, it's nice to meet you.

Hi Amber, I'm Robin and this is Blue. I usually have a better handle on him. But, he got away from me this time. Didn't ya Blue?

That was the first time we met. With the intrusion of her dog Blue. Robin and I became fast friends. From that moment on we were always together.


Anyway, something like that. Would that work? Can I go back and forth like that? Let me know. Thanks.
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Re: A SAMPLE by William · Jun 9, 06 - 8:01 PM
Re: Re: A SAMPLE by Sybrena · Jun 11, 06 - 11:10 AM
Re: TOPIC 1 by Sybrena · Jun 9, 06 - 5:18 AM
TOPIC 2 by William · Jun 13, 06 - 1:56 PM


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